You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter1) explain why you have moved.2) describe the new house.3) Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear......,
Hope you and your family is well. I am writing to tell that I have moved to a new house which is located in urban area and connected with public transport.
The new house is a big one which includes two bedrooms with attach bathrooms, a lobby, study room, dinning hall and a kitchen. There is also a garden and small playground for playing basketball and badminton. It is built on the corner of Ranjit Avenue and no neighbour situated nearby so ventilation is proper in this home. Apart from that, main advantage of this area is well equipped with modern facilities which required for the overall development of children.
I would be very happy if you visit my house and spend few days with me. Famous Gurudwaras, Temples and two historical sites are located near our area so if you come then we enjoy the visit to these places.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Wishes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear......, Hope you and your family is well. I am w...
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...ea and connected with public transport. The new house is a big one which include...
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...corner of Ranjit Avenue and no neighbour situated nearby so ventilation is proper...
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...or the overall development of children. I would be very happy if you visit my ho...
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...am looking forward to hearing from you. Best Wishes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62732919255 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48698630544 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689440993789 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3173723192 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7777777778 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148121975672 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554550290012 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569944374587 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103625353828 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735173683274 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.