You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear James,
I am writing to inform you that I have shifted my residence from the Downtown to the Eastern Residence colony. Now, the hassles of the long drive to and from office and the resultant fatigue come to an end as the accommodation is on a few miles from my workplace. Finally, I can utilize the saved time on the reading and can involve myself in some active sports.
Let me explain to you that the new house is in the middle of the colony with all the required amenities of life whereas the room space is quite spacious. It consists of a living room, 2-bedrooms and privately maintained swimming pool whereas the community center facing the house is having sports complex. Moreover, the community is free from the agony of paid parking with an ample parking space available for the residents. Furthermore, I will be inviting my family permanently within a couple of months.
I would like to ask you to pay a visit to the new house over this weekend and I am certain that you will admire the structure and atmosphere.
Thank you
Yours truly,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65608465608 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55412559816 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608465608466 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.146952285 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7777777778 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192729714357 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760917445316 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609580369902 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108598552224 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302128795766 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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