Nowadays science has progressed so much that people are expected to be able to live 100-years in the nearest future. Some people think that it is a positive trend, while others disagree.
Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Mankind is trying from its beginning to increase the life expectancy and so far have made tremendous progress in this pursuit. While the scores of people are happy with the improvement in the age-index, a few believe this phenomenon as a negative development. In this essay, I will present a comparative analysis of both the views and will present my support for the former view.
Those who believe that living an average of hundred years will invite more problems might argue that the health or insurance cost for elders will increase enormously. For instance, the old people are more prone to fall prey of diseases due to slow body functionality, especially the digestive system. Consequently, intense care and expensive medication are required, if someone is suffering from a disease. Furthermore, these senior fellows cannot productively contribute to society and considered as a burden instead of a resource.
Conversely, the scientific developments made it possible to overcome the deadly epidemics which were causing millions of deaths in the past. In addition to this, the transplantation of various vital organs are happening, as a result, the life expectancy of people in the developed countries is approaching near hundred. Many countries have revised the superannuation age from 60 to 65 and keep taking the advantage from these senior citizen's experience.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that scientific advancement not only helped in the health sector but also in all other spheres of life and has improved the living standard of the dwellers of this planet. Although these benefits come at a cost, these outweigh the disadvantages of scientific inventions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33082706767 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06096311093 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627819548872 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3323863484 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10874263078 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034883453798 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317321573069 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606037138502 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368550755483 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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