Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The different creatures are always of an interest for the human beings as these living beings provide an opportunity for entertainment and learning. Many people are proposing to abandon the artificial shelter places like zoos, whereas others oppose the opinion. In this essay, I will draw a comparative analysis of these notions and present my support for the latter view.
All of the maintained habitats of the animals capture these predators, exotic animals & birds from the wild. The process of arresting them sometimes results in a casualty of either the animal or the person trying to capture them. Furthermore, inhibiting them to a confined space could be fatal for the race of a specific animal. For instance, the dwellers of the zoos do not feel comfortable in the captivity and might not mate, which will result in a extinction. The caretakers often provide a limited amount of food to them which otherwise would be available in abundance.
On contrary to the above, the zoos are a great source of information and entertainment for all age people. For example, visitors can witness the wild, giant, and vividly colored creatures and get themselves educated about the ethnicity, race, current population and other features of these. Consequently, this can be helpful in their preservation, in case they are in danger of extinction. Additionally, many modern zoos have a facility of breeding for the endangered species. Moreover, the zoos are a splendid source as these provide innumerable species within limited space.
In conclusion, I tend to support the establishments of the zoos as the wildlife space is shrinking at an alarming rate due to industrialization. Once a particular species is out of danger, the efforts can be made to free them in their own ecological environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17465753425 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03164669187 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585616438356 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0199916736 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.733333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177960601999 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057750823325 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253729663245 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107988680008 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211975185723 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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