you have recently moved to a different house.
write a letter to an English-speaking friend. in your letter
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite you friend to come and visit.
Hope this Letter finds you in the Pink of your health. i am writing to let you know that we have moved to a bigger house a few days ago.
To begin with, as you know that twins are growing up and we could not go on living in the two-bedroom bungalow. Moreover, my currently job was too far away from such place so we started to looking another habitation and finally here we are in our new home.
Furthermore, I am sure you will like it. we have Four bedrooms now, and a modern kitchen and very spacious living room. What is more, it has a beautiful garden with green lush grass and last but not least swimming pool at one side of the house.
Laconically, it would be grateful to all of us if you come on this weekend and see what you think of our new place?. We would all love to see you and if weather is pleasant we can have barbecue in the garden.
Our new address and phone number are below, so give us a call and let us know when to expect you.
Lots of Love,
Harrie
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- Some people say that attendance should be made compulsory in educational institutions. Others believe that it should be optional. Which of these two views do you support and why? 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...r finds you in the Pink of your health. i am writing to let you know that we have...
^
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r finds you in the Pink of your health. i am writing to let you know that we have...
^
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... modern kitchen and very spacious living room. What is more, it has a beautiful g...
^^
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...rden with green lush grass and last but not least swimming pool at one side of the house....
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 185, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'barbecued'.
Suggestion: barbecued
... and if weather is pleasant we can have barbecue in the garden. Our new address and p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Love seems to be countable; consider using: 'Lots of (Love)'.
Suggestion: Lots of (Love)
... and let us know when to expect you. Lots of Love, Harrie
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... let us know when to expect you. Lots of Love, Harrie
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, as to, you know, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.09793814433 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12369257323 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649484536082 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3857140712 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2727272727 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 4.34317383033 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243252696051 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951891017594 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650863709251 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141584757338 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735381952273 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 8.71597938144 71% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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