Dear Alexander,
I'm really grateful for your kindness letter last month. I hope all thing be good for your family, especially Anna and Hanna, As I told you before, finally, I have moved to Toronto and rent house in the Richmond Hills neighborhood.
I had many terrible with my last apartment, which was located in rural areas in Ontario, and I had a low salary job near that city. Jessy and I have decided to move to the megacity and rent better accommodation.
In our new house which is near to my occupation, we have tow big rooms with a spacious living room that we spend our time in there. Also, we have a pleasant environment in our yard with a small pool in there, which is a perfect location for children to play outside the room, and we can have a rest quietly in our place.
I like to tell you about our housewarming, which is held at the weekend. And I wanna see you and your family have a special dinner with us.
Best Wishes,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Alexander, Im really grateful for your kindness lette...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40449438202 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46669521418 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4955024529 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1111111111 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200975084548 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845109328415 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645473492059 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127338506478 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633390691006 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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