You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Saad,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing in reference to inform that I have moved to a new house in the center of the city due to some reasons. Let me explain in detail.
Although there were many reasons which made me to relocate to a new house however the primary reason was the commuting distance from my office. To elucidate my previous apartment was located in the suburbs of the city therefore commuting to and from my office was making my life miserable. Additionally due to travelling I used to get tired therefore I was not able to spend time on leisure activities.
Now I have moved into a plush one bedroom studio located in the city center. The best part about the studio is that it is located in a gated society and provides all the modern amenities like gynasium, swimming pool and 24 hours security. Moreover the apartment is located at a walking distance from my office which reduces travel time therefore I can spend some quality time on outdoor sport activities. Lastly I am planning to invite all my college friends to a small party at my studio apartment next Saturday. Why don’t you come and join us? I promise you that it will be a lot of fun.
I look forward to see you next week.
Regards
Sedan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Saad, Hope you are doing well. I am writing in...
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Line 4, column 291, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...my office was making my life miserable. Additionally due to travelling I used to get tired t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 240, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...m, swimming pool and 24 hours security. Moreover the apartment is located at a walking d...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
... will be a lot of fun. I look forward to see you next week. Regards Sedan
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... forward to see you next week. Regards Sedan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48657213018 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575221238938 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5743885036 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2307692308 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144048918264 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544541660091 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516852855795 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997831169443 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635427985863 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.