You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
. thank your friend for the holiday.
. explain that you left your wallet in their house.
. give them instructions of how to send it back to you.
Dear Dodi,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in reference to inquire about my wallet which I have forgotten at your home.
Firstly I want to thank you and Jane for the amazing hospitality during my vacation in Bali. I can say that it was a truly alluring experience and I will relinquish the memories for the rest of my life. Additionally, let me tell you that Jane is an excellent photographer as she has taken some excellent photographs. Whenever I look back on the pictures I remember the adventure sports we did on the island which gave us adrenaline rush especially the bungee jumping.
Lastly, I may have forgotten my wallet at your house as I realized it only when I reached back home. if I remember correctly the wallet was kept in the turquoise cabinet in the common room. The wallet contains some cash and credit cards hence if you find it please send it to immediately me via speed post to my mailing address.
I look forward to your response and seeing you soon.
Yours Sincerely
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Dodi, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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Line 4, column 318, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e has taken some excellent photographs. Whenever I look back on the pictures I remember ...
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Line 4, column 469, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ine rush especially the bungee jumping. Lastly, I may have forgotten my wallet a...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...lized it only when I reached back home. if I remember correctly the wallet was kep...
^^
Line 6, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lized it only when I reached back home. if I remember correctly the wallet was kep...
^^
Line 6, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e via speed post to my mailing address. I look forward to your response and seei...
^^^
Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e and seeing you soon. Yours Sincerely Said
^^^
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eeing you soon. Yours Sincerely Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, look, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59239130435 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62093483048 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646739130435 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0034796145 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8181818182 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295035327771 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108367470507 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612427097322 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188140848147 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410559701999 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.