Dear George,
How are you doing?. I just want to inform you that today morning I got down at the airport and I would like to thank for the last week we spent wholly for the trip. Especially, the skiing was tremendous but i never going to try it again. Even though it was too scary but I had learned how to ride when skiing. Moreover, next time when we plan for the trip, we should not have it on holidays. Because we spent the whole day on the reservation to ride skiing. We could have enjoyed the other activities in the standing time. I forgot to mention to you, I have missed my wallet in the left corner of your bedroom. Until last minute i had that in mind, but unfortunately i forgot to carry as I rushed myself to not to miss my flight. Could you please send that purse into my home address. I will mention my address below,2nd Stree,Thandu Mariamman kovil opposite. Thanks for your help. I am looking forward to hearing from you. If you please any difficulties please contact my number 254558845.
Yours lovingly
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
... doing?. I just want to inform you that today morning I got down at the airport and I would l...
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Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rip, we should not have it on holidays. Because we spent the whole day on the reservati...
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Line 2, column 631, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rner of your bedroom. Until last minute i had that in mind, but unfortunately i f...
^
Line 2, column 669, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e i had that in mind, but unfortunately i forgot to carry as I rushed myself to n...
^
Line 2, column 828, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Thandu
... will mention my address below,2nd Stree,Thandu Mariamman kovil opposite. Thanks for yo...
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Line 2, column 926, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...am looking forward to hearing from you. If you please any difficulties please cont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39267015707 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41265270348 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633507853403 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2300067225 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.9333333333 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327182974395 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106351195943 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09039483094 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316752989757 0.12726935374 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.29 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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