Recent research unveiled the statistics about how millions of people are preferring to visit other countries for activity. This denotes most of the travelers are tend to look out for experiencing the hazard games as well as gaining knowledge on them. But one good reason many people are stimulated by tourism is the sudden downfall of price. That's why the number of people are intended to visit and participate in some of the activities which are conducted by the country. For instance, Rockville which is the county of Washington DC is notorious for the skydive. Most people are intended to try this hazardous game because they want to gain the thrill. This essay argues that why people are preferred to try activities like an adventure in other countries.
In my first view, people spending their leisure time on activities like hiking, skiing, climbing, and many more water sports. Predominantly, the one thing everyone should keep in mind before trying out these games that is a safety precaution. For example, if anybody wants to try skiing, they should have to study safety measures prior to attending the activity. As this holds information about how to handle sticks, what actions to be taken if an emergency situation arises and how to contact respective officers. Furthermore, apart from safety, people want to enjoy their time with these sports would mainly devote peace of mind, reducing mental pressure and stress out.
On the flip side, even though it has plenty of pros, but it has certain cons as well. Firstly, some countries are restricted to use plastic materials like cups, bottles, cover and other plastic items. Not only plastic, people sometimes making camp with a fire and enjoy their outdoor activity. As a consequence, human incautious leads to wildfire. Thereby devasting wild animals and inhabitants are occurring.
To summarize, certainly people invasion to the diverse country would culminate the point of the economy. Whilst people have the sense and precaution on not to harm any inhabitants would be better tourism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
... This denotes most of the travelers are tend to look out for experiencing the hazard...
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Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ourism is the sudden downfall of price. Thats why the number of people are intended t...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...re intended to visit and participate in some of the activities which are conducted by the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61481665829 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0748974496 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.6315789474 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0789662373737 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234082207758 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265204309133 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0491787168281 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281559648662 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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