You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• explain the important event
• apologise for the situation
• suggest a new arrangement
Dear Derrick,
Hope you are doing well. I would like to sadly inform you about the postponement of my trip from 15 July to 1st August due to an important event at home. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate my cousin Jenny is getting married and it took all of us by surprise. As you know that she is of our age group, therefore, she holds a special place in my heart from childhood days so it crucial for me to attend her marriage. The marriage functions will last about a week from 15th July to 27th of July. Although I was planning to skip the marriage event however I have been given additional responsibilities for making arrangement during the event as her father is sick. Additionally, I would like to apologize for the trouble I have caused you since you had made arrangements for my stay at your home moreover you had cancelled all your prior appointments and made some advance bookings to tourist attractions spots.
Lastly, I plan to visit London in the 1st week of August as the weather is pleasant and best for sight-seeing. Additionally, Terry will also accompany me this time as she is fond of travelling and exploring new destinations.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
With love
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to seeing you soon. With love Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, lastly, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64814814815 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77979864761 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5277718902 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234969052703 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655310206201 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619902983904 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125841891144 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600143918334 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.