You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• explain the important event
• apologise for the situation
• suggest a new arrangement
Dear Mike,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you that I need to reschedule my trip to London as I have an important event coming up at home. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I had almost forgotten about the birthday of my wife before booking my tickets. This has happened in the past as well when I have missed her birthday due to official travel. Although she would not stop me from travelling to London however this time I plan to stay as I am planning a surprise party for her. I know you would be disappointed too as you were looking forward to meeting me, therefore, I would like to apologize for the last minute changes in my travel schedule.
Lastly, I plan to reschedule my trip to August as I have heard that it the best time to visit London. Additionally, Jenna will also accompany me on this trip so I think it will be a good opportunity for you to know her since you will be meeting her for the first time. Moreover, do let me know if you anything from India.
I look forward to your reply and seeing you soon.
Warm wishes
said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to...
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g up at home. Let me explain in detail. To elucidate I had almost forgotten abou...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reply and seeing you soon. Warm wishes said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27450980392 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4222432973 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7116686503 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163960933095 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593466304211 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561115780078 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122152892915 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564560972623 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.