You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Harold,
I hope this letter finds you in good health, I am writing to you to inform you about my new home address and invite you to come to visit it.
As I told you before, in past year I had a lot of difficulties with my neighbors. They were very noisy and inconsiderate with the rights of other neighbors. Fortunately, I could purchase a new house in West Street. To describe it, it is around 130 square meters with a large yard full of rose and lily flowers. My new home has two bedrooms with a quite spacey living room. It is very cozy and convenient. At the one corner of my sitting room, there is a fireplace and at the other corner is placed a TV table. The color of walls is matched with the furniture.
I would like to invite you to join us for visiting my home at this Saturday evening. My new address is No.15, West Street. If you have any difficulties for finding my address you could call me.
Hope to see you soon,
Javad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f walls is matched with the furniture. I would like to invite you to join us fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25274725275 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.402249077 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.622605031667 94% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2626271792 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5384615385 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 4.34317383033 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183688621661 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590808515808 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686758049144 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134698455453 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769706865828 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.15 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.