You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear my lovely,
I write this letter for you because I have a big chance in my life. I have space: pre-wrap; background-quited my job and after a long time to find a new job. I applied in GLP company. this company has many interesting things for me. but they offer that I must come into Hanoi. so I moved from my family and come here.
Where I rent is a small flat. but it is suitable for me with a bed and small restroom. And you know, I am a person who always loves to cook. so I still have a modern cooker and heater.
If you have time, I am very happy please come to my flat. I have so many things want to share and talk with you.
I miss you so much.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd after a long time to find a new job. I applied in GLP company. this company ha...
^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...nd a new job. I applied in GLP company. this company has many interesting things for...
^^^^
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...they offer that I must come into Hanoi. so I moved from my family and come here. ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... moved from my family and come here. Where I rent is a small flat. but it is suita...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... here. Where I rent is a small flat. but it is suitable for me with a bed and sm...
^^^
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...I am a person who always loves to cook. so I still have a modern cooker and heater...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 537.0 937.175257732 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 136.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.94852941176 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24956743247 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 127.690721649 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 171.0 290.88556701 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.7654890203 44.8134815571 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 41.3076923077 76.5299724578 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.4615384615 16.8248392259 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196740085615 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638137263046 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520133484954 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134788315674 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487657224042 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 2.4 8.37731958763 29% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.15 8.71597938144 48% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.64 7.59969072165 74% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 41.2886597938 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.