You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.
Write to your friend. In the letter:
• Describe the house.
• Describe the neighbourhood.
• Invite your friend to come and see the house.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Haider,
How are you? I can’t resist myself from writing you about the new place I have moved in last week.
You will be surprised to know that the house totally looks like your grandparent’s old house from the outside. I’m renting a two bed room apartment in the 2nd floor with a large balcony and I love how spacious all the rooms are. As the apartment is south-facing and no high raised buildings are nearby, sunlight and air are always creating a healthy atmosphere inside the house. However, I am thinking of replacing few of the furniture’s as they are too old fashioned.
The neighborhood is the center of all historic sites of the town and there are few restaurants which are opened all night what made me happy. Moreover, I have observed that most of the neighbors here are moderate minded and they are usually strict about keeping the area clean and tidy.
Why don’t you come by to stay over the weekend? I can promise you that I’ll take you to a number of touristic spots and will cook some authentic dish for you.
See you soon,
Shahla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will cook some authentic dish for you. See you soon, Shahla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73958333333 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69980628806 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671875 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4223920602 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7272727273 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204165980871 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769617778604 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595307733298 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114535077516 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668170202447 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.