You have a problem with a neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter
. Describe the problem
. say how long it has been a problem.
. Explain what action you want the neighbors to take
Dear Mr. Agustus,
How are you? I am writing to bring your attention to the noise comes from your house every other night, between 11pm to 3 in the morning. I assume, this loud music plays from your son's bedroom on the 1st floor.
I have heard this music since last summer and tried to avoid giving it any attention. but since my exam will take place in couple of months, I need to concentrate on study and I do not have any option but to ensure sound sleep, so I can wake up fresh for long hours of classes every morning. I have tried to keep the windows and doors closed to keep my house quiet, but the music is too loud and I often struggle to fall asleep.
At this situation, I would suggest you to turn down the volume after 10.00 pm. Also, you can consider to renovate your son's room to make it sound-proof. One of my friend has a sound studio and he made his studio sound-proof all by himself. If you are interested, I can put you in touch with him and he would be able to help.
I hope you will take necessary action soon.
Kind regards,
Shahla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Agustus, How are you? I am writing to bring your ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me, this loud music plays from your sons bedroom on the 1st floor. I have h...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r sons bedroom on the 1st floor. I have heard this music since last summer...
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Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...tried to avoid giving it any attention. but since my exam will take place in couple...
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Line 13, column 94, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider renovating'.
Suggestion: consider renovating
...he volume after 10.00 pm. Also, you can consider to renovate your sons room to make it sound-proof. ...
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Line 17, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pe you will take necessary action soon. Kind regards, Shahla
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Line 21, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...essary action soon. Kind regards, Shahla
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion soon. Kind regards, Shahla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28780487805 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14410082603 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639024390244 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.270204381 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.25 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170181068815 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639359812121 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482293079241 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111169545664 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374731388887 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.