You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.Write to your friend. In the letter:• Describe the house.• Describe the neighbourhood.• Invite your friend to come and see the house.You do not need to write

Dear John,

Hope you are doing good, there is a good new ! we have finally found the perfect accommodation we were searching for from so long. We moved into our new house last week and I would like to invite you to come over see our new place.

The new house is a two storey fully furnished three bedroom house. Each bedroom has attached bathroom, isn’t it awesome?, the kitchen is spacious and equipped with all the modern amenities. It has a small garden outside where we can sit chit chat and have tea.

The neighborhood is lovely, in fact, we have already made some friends in a week’s time. Also, convenient stores like seven eleven and tesco are just few mins walk. There is a beautiful park near our house which has a running track and people can exercise or simply sit and enjoy the breeze.

Why don’t you and Sarah come visit us this weekend, I am sure you will love this place. Moreover, it has been long we have not met.

Looking forward to your reply.

Best Regards,
Jane

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, Hope you are doing good, there is a good...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...u are doing good, there is a good new ! we have finally found the perfect accommod...
^^
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...wo storey fully furnished three bedroom house. Each bedroom has attached bathroom, is...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...forward to your reply. Best Regards, Jane
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, moreover, so, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6043956044 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28651797979 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697802197802 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6300522632 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8333333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212834562949 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614400113755 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578812017481 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105905961269 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527019246956 0.0580467560999 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.