You have recently started work in a new company Write a letter to an English speaking friend In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him her your other news

Dear mr. Tom
I hope you and your family is well . I had resigned from my previous company and I took a new job in other company . Here I want to tell you I have some issues in my old job about salary . There my salary was to low . I could not manage my home with this money .
Now I am working in a new company this company is a big transportation. I work there as a mechanic . Thus, I found a good money from there and I am happy with my new job . In this company they gave us so many facilities like accommodation,transport,even free food . So it is a much better more then before .
Here I want to tell you I will meet you in this weekend so try to make a free time for me we will go outside together for dinner . Hope you will come there . I am looking forward to hear something good from you .
Best regards
Parminder Singh

Votes
Average: 8.9 (4 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear mr. Tom I hope you and your family is well . I h...
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Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... I hope you and your family is well . I had resigned from my previous company...
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Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ny and I took a new job in other company . Here I want to tell you I have some iss...
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Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e some issues in my old job about salary . There my salary was to low . I could no...
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Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: TO_TOO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... job about salary . There my salary was to low . I could not manage my home with t...
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Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...bout salary . There my salary was to low . I could not manage my home with this mo...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...could not manage my home with this money . Now I am working in a new compan...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not manage my home with this money . Now I am working in a new company this c...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ansportation. I work there as a mechanic . Thus, I found a good money from there a...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good money'.
Suggestion: good money
...ork there as a mechanic . Thus, I found a good money from there and I am happy with my new j...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rom there and I am happy with my new job . In this company they gave us so many fa...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , transport
...us so many facilities like accommodation,transport,even free food . So it is a much better...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e accommodation,transport,even free food . So it is a much better more then before...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...free food . So it is a much better more then before . Here I want to tell you I...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... So it is a much better more then before . Here I want to tell you I will mee...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t is a much better more then before . Here I want to tell you I will meet you ...
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e we will go outside together for dinner . Hope you will come there . I am looking...
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Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...er for dinner . Hope you will come there . I am looking forward to hear something ...
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... will come there . I am looking forward to hear something good from you . Best regard...
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Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... forward to hear something good from you . Best regards Parminder Singh
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...something good from you . Best regards Parminder Singh
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, then, thus, well, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 660.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0243902439 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82986489617 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3676728703 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 47.1428571429 76.5299724578 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7142857143 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19540138075 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607537866897 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588637044458 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129518432532 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481410122906 0.0580467560999 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.4 8.37731958763 41% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.85 8.71597938144 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.53 7.59969072165 73% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 41.2886597938 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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