You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English Speaking friend. In your letter
Explain why you changed jobs
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you hale and hearty. It's been quite long since we met. Well, I am writing this letter to share a good news with you. I have finally managed to switch my job. As you are aware i was really frustrated with my previous job. The office location was very far from my home and i used to had a lot of hassle in commuting. Secondly, office hours and pay scale was not up to my expectations. Thankfully, I got my desired job in a Multinational as a Project Manager after a hefty assessment process. The best part is that is quite near to my residence. Furthermore, office hours are flexible enough that i can maintain a good work-life balance. Enough for now, as i have to rush, some guests are coming at my place. My sister is coming with her new born baby boy and quite thrilled to hold my nephew for the first time. Do write to me about you and your family as well. Take care.
Yours Sincerely,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you hale and hear...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...Well, I am writing this letter to share a good news with you. I have finally managed to swi...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... have finally managed to switch my job. As you are aware i was really frustrated w...
^^
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...aged to switch my job. As you are aware i was really frustrated with my previous ...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... location was very far from my home and i used to had a lot of hassle in commutin...
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Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., office hours are flexible enough that i can maintain a good work-life balance. ...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as well. Take care. Yours Sincerely, Jack
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29943502825 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42340613922 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661016949153 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3165802317 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.3571428571 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6428571429 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157056955842 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558375797632 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685275642783 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139741256359 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.77 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.