You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter:
• Explain why changed jobs
• Describe your new job
• Tell him/her your other news
Dear Paul,
I hope you and your family are doing fine, it has been quite some time since we were together. I hope you and Carla can visit me soon, so that I can repay you the wonderful time I spent with folks the last time I visited you. I am writing this letter to let you know that I have a new job now as a supply chain supervisor in ABC Company.
The reason for leaving my previous job is that it was so boring. I kept performing the same task every day which was registering trucks plate numbers on the system. Although it was an easy job, I did not gain any value added experience. That is why I was searching for a new career opportunity for the past 2 months.
My new job is very exciting, I get to communicate and interact with different departments on daily basis. In addition, despite the fact that I am a new employee, I will be joining a lean sex sigma course next month. That course will be very beneficial for my career.
Furthermore, I am getting engaged to Susan next month. I believe you met her in your birthday party last summer. I will let you know the exact date once we agree on it.
Send my love to Carla,
Kinds Regards,
Muhammad
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25560538117 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3890784229 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8370935803 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.7857142857 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203629161723 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605105200936 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618930307187 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881243628894 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616319754174 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.