You working for a company, you need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• Explain why you want to take some time off work
• Give details of the amount of time you need
• Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing this letter to request an annual leave for 14 days starting next Sunday 25th of April.
The reason for my request is that my wife will perform an operation in her left leg as a result of a dislocated bone. As she was sweeping the floor, she fell off the stairs and according to her doctor, she will require full time care. In addition, I have to take care of our 2 years old child as well as she will not be able to do so.
Regarding the amount of time I need for this annual leave, please be advised that although, as per the doctor, it will take about 3 – 4 weeks for my wife to recover and to be able to move and walk normally again, she can start walking and moving around again after 2 weeks. And that is why I believe that 14 days off work will be suitable for me.
As for the daily business operations, kindly be informed that while I am away, Adham will be performing my duties. In the same time, and as for the emails, I will be handling it myself remotely from home. Despite the fact that I will be extremely busy taking care of my wife and son, I am always reachable via phone or email in case of any emergency.
I am looking forward to receiving your response as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,
Muhammad Ramzy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...cording to her doctor, she will require full time care. In addition, I have to take care ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, well, while, as for, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20408163265 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23152230441 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0445972364 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6363636364 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 4.34317383033 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146476996458 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613461138496 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359955058404 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772713243234 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368267105583 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.38 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.