Dear sir
I am Robin wind from Technical Department. Sir I am writing to apply for the leave of 2 weeks as I have to be with my wife, we are expecting a baby soon by this month end. We are very excited and decided to go to my in-laws place for delivery which is in country side. I am afraid I could not travel so long. We are expecting a normal delivery but incase of emergency i need to be with her.
Regarding my pending works I would be in contact through mails and my project is almost completed. My project details are with my team head who has already Review all the points and aspects. By next month first I will be at your service.I am delight to intimate you our last tend has been approved and very soon we will receive our quotations.
Henceforth I expect you will accept my leave
Your faithfully
Robin wind
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...m Technical Department. Sir I am writing to apply for the leave of 2 weeks as I h...
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...in country side. I am afraid I could not travel so long. We are expecting a norma...
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... We are expecting a normal delivery but incase of emergency i need to be with her. Rega...
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... normal delivery but incase of emergency i need to be with her. Regarding my pen...
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...ormal delivery but incase of emergency i need to be with her. Regarding my pend...
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...ll the points and aspects. By next month first I will be at your service.I am de...
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... aspects. By next month first I will be at your service.I am delight to intimate...
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...month first I will be at your service.I am delight to intimate you our last ten...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, regarding, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22784810127 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37566981759 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626582278481 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2966464778 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2222222222 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0951986792677 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390668397017 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427906610275 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690991761537 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258730234677 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.