Hi Pasa,
Hope you are in the pinkest of your health and doing well. I am doing well. Its been long since I have written to you and now as soon as I am relatively free, I am writing to you.
I had been very busy for the last few weeks since I have recently changed my job. As you know I was working with ABC which is located at the other end of city. Due to this the daily commute was long and tiring. I was finding it difficult to balance work with family.
A neighbor of mine who works at XYZ referred me for the same profile at his company. I cleared all the interview rounds and landed an offer on the same day. Luckily, this company is just a five minute walk away from my house.
How is everything at your end?
Give my regards to everybody in the family. Hope to hear from you soon.
Best Regards,
Amber
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s since I have recently changed my job. As you know I was working with ABC which i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12962962963 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0560745276 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6826193909 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 47.7857142857 76.5299724578 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5714285714 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188678990396 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544335623212 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522738915138 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965696502027 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418552061508 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.8 8.37731958763 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.49 8.71597938144 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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