Dear Madam,
I am a student residing in Room No. 103, Block A of girls hostel Main Building. I am writing to you with respect to the challenges that I am currently facing with the room and arrangement.
Block A of Hostel main building is located close to the college auditorium. Since, my room is located on the ground floor, it gets noisy in the evening when the drama club members do their rehearsals. I have to take afternoon calls for work but it becomes very challenging since most of the times my team members on call complain that I am not audible.
I would also like to inform you that I work for the early morning shift and leave for work at 6 a.m. My roommate who works during evening shifts returns from work at 2 a.m. My sleep gets interrupted due to which I remain lazy for the rest of the day.
In view of the above, I would request you to change my room with a day shift room mate so that I can focus better on my work.
Yours Sincerely
Amber
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... room is located on the ground floor, it gets noisy in the evening when the drama...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so that I can focus better on my work. Yours Sincerely Amber
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27027027027 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31535667927 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5908881248 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210225030212 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853639626362 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648392428661 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128526156157 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494727235846 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.