Dear Madam,
I am writing to you to highlight the problems that I am facing with the bicycle parking near my work place.
It gives me immense pleasure to share that I have recently started commuting to work by bicycle as it is one of the best ways to conserve our natural environment. Not only is it eco-friendly but economical as well.
Earlier, I couldn't find time to exercise during week days owing to my busy work schedule. Cycling is one of the best exercises for which I don't even have to set aside any specific time since it fits in my schedule. This new routine has added agility and I can see a positive change in my health owing to cycling.
While I am impressed with the benefits, I would like to express my disappointment about the two large garbage bins placed in the vicinity of bicycle parking lot. Most of the times the lids of these bins are open with the waste strewn across the floor emitting bad odor. This is hazardous to health and has also caused a lot of inconvenience. A lot of people have started parking their bicycles outside the stands causing unnecessary nuisance.
Request you to change the place of garbage bins to a suitable spot so that the parking does not get affected. I hope you understand the urgency of situation and will take the necessary action as soon as possible.
Thanking You,
Amber
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60165975104 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55904600344 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605809128631 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7376493374 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3076923077 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246639319706 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779070415298 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082231433207 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141892912583 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972979350799 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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