Dear Sir/ Madam,
I, Amber Shaw, have an account in World Bank for the last 5 years. I am writing to you in response to your letter Ref.# WB012345 dated 10th Sep 2018. I have been intimated by World Bank that $240 has been overdrawn from my account and I would be charged $70 as a penalty for same.
I would like to bring it to your notice that no such transaction has been made by me. I have reviewed my account summary online. My account still has the minimum required balance.
I would request you to check your records and confirm this information to me.
Yours sincerely
Amber
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ter Ref.# WB012345 dated 10th Sep 2018. I have been intimated by World Bank that ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... be charged 0 as a penalty for same. I would like to bring it to your notice t...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o such transaction has been made by me. I have reviewed my account summary online...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 485.0 937.175257732 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 109.0 206.0 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4495412844 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.231146315 3.78020617076 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2933577876 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 127.690721649 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669724770642 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 138.6 290.88556701 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1775993081 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.625 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3311039755 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128082977183 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507462230232 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207395255076 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750922738968 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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