You have recently started work in a new company
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you changed jobs
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Dear XYZ,
I am writing to inform you that I have changed my job recently and relocated to another city. although, the previous job helped me in getting a good experience but the frequent travelling to their remote sites was disturbing my social life. The abundance of offshore travelling and residing made me sick to my stomach, that is why I start looking for new opportunities.
Let me explain to you that the new employment not mainly the office job but also a mid-senior level position. The operations of the current company are not that much scattered whereas a huge potential of growth is forecasted as the company progresses. A supervisory position with no late sittings was always my dream, as a result, I can pursue other productive activities. The work environment in the company is quite professional and all of the colleagues are supportive of each other.
Furthermore, I have restarted a professional certification which I was unable to pursue due to the lack of time. The exams are scheduled for next June and I am pretty sure of success at this attempt. Finally, I have planned a week recreational tour towards Dubai with the office mates in the next month and will spend time in the sunshine.
Goodbye until next time
Yours truly,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...recently and relocated to another city. although, the previous job helped me in getting ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...n the company is quite professional and all of the colleagues are supportive of each other...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, look, so, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88837209302 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91121179878 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618604651163 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7505659305 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5454545455 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150482035287 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511523463559 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473448362798 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560905732899 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455872533733 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.