You have recently studied in another country but had to leave the course in between and return back to your country.
Write a letter to the course administrator-
Thank him/her for assisting you with enrolling into this course.
Explain him/her why you had to leave this course.
Tell what you liked about this course.
Dear Mr. James,
I am Jackson Simpson from the September 2018 batch of Data Science. I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance provided for choosing an informative course as well as enrolling in time. Moreover, your suggestion to apply for financial aid was a big help since I am a foreign student.
I am afraid, I will not be able to pursue the program any further due to unforeseen circumstances at personal level and will have to leave at the earliest for my country. Last Tuesday, I received an email from my family mentioned, wherein he mentioned that my mother in at stage IV Parkinson's meaning which, she needs immediate and full time attention. As it is only me and mother in the family, I would like to spend the rest of time with her taking after her needs and being an emotional support.
I thoroughly enjoyed the interactive sessions and the capstone projects during the executive programs; this teaching style built a strong foundation for data science. Last but no the least, I would like to appreciate the innovative teaching methods of our professor, Mr. Jeffery. Additionally, I made some real good friends while at the campus.
If conditions permit, I would definitely like to resume the classes. Let me know if there are any options to continue the course. Looking forward for your response.
Your's sincerely,
Jackson Simpson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... meaning which, she needs immediate and full time attention. As it is only me and mother ...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...g foundation for data science. Last but no the least, I would like to appreciate t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, as well as, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87606837607 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73774239093 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65811965812 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2958704177 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7692307692 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146847426379 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458378995967 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614638886822 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762572703405 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500564880189 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.