You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter:
• Give details of your stay
• What were the high & low points of the hotel
• What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have recently stayed in your hotel Park Inn Bangalore, for about a week ago. The outside temperature was quite high during and unfortunately, when I am entered in the hotel room air conditioner was not fully operational. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction and given proposition. Due to this and would like you to take steps so that it does not happen again.
I was checked into the hotel at afternoon on 24th July and straightaway went to bed. However, after turning the air conditioner on, I realized that the room was not getting cooler and the room temperature was exceptional high, but the outside view was astonish which was give me some peace and pleasure.
I called the hotel staff to solve the problem but they could not do anything and no other room was available at that time. Hence, I decided to stay in this room and open the window so natural air to cool my room. I had to sleep in skimpy clothes, which I don't and prefer, to over the heat. Noise from the road came through in the open window and my sleep was disrupted again and again.
I think it would be a good idea to install the central heating and cooling system and be ready for such arousal issues. A room system for each room along with the central heating and cooling system will be check before the guest come into the room. . Perhaps you would consider giving me a discount if I stay at your hotel next time.
Regards,
Gaurav Sharma.
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| 2020-03-31 | vijay.jagwani | 67 | view |
| 2019-11-20 | sudheerssmg | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'astonished'.
Suggestion: astonished
...eptional high, but the outside view was astonish which was give me some peace and pleasu...
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Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oblem but they could not do anything and no other room was available at that time...
^^
Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l air to cool my room. I had to sleep in skimpy clothes, which I dont and prefer,...
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Line 7, column 258, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ad to sleep in skimpy clothes, which I dont and prefer, to over the heat. Noise fro...
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Line 9, column 250, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ck before the guest come into the room. . Perhaps you would consider giving me a ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 5.05154639175 337% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51310861423 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42367047008 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5887428836 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0714285714 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159104878803 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609034660131 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908435724542 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102505310705 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759176074251 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.