You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
• say which advertisement you are answering
• describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
• explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Mohan,
I am writing this letter in reference to the advertisement for an English language tutor required in the community college for night classes and I saw this advertisement in the Sunday magazine.
I would like to teach English grammar required in writing section, and this will include punctuations, spelling checks, use of an article, collocations, different forms of writing including informal, formal, semiformal and many more other subsections will be covered.
My qualifications are Masters of Arts in English language with 12 years of regular experience in high school teaching. In addition to that, I have supported number of writers in checking their novels in proof reading. And, I will be available in night shift timings as I am not working anywhere these days, so it will help me to save some money also. The location of college is also near to my hometown, thus travelling will be easy for me.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mohan, I am writing this letter in reference to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more other subsections will be covered. My qualifications are Masters of Arts in...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
..., so it will help me to save some money also. The location of college is also near t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12195121951 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89016671709 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.315852711 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17441403039 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066672719557 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780505124125 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111638599105 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094743575825 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.