Dear Mr and Mrs Thompson,
My name is Collins and writing this letter in response to your advertisement published in Vogue magazine few days back. I have many qualities, which you will find aptly suiting the job requirements. Starting with, I have recently enrolled for 6 months English course in Wellington College which is just 10 minutes walk from your house. Therefore, I would like to consider your offer and it also brings me great pleasure to spend time with your child.
Further, I have few qualifications and relevant experience which I am sure you will find fascinating. Recently, I have finished Child care course, 40 hours sessions for 5weeks, designed particularly for people considering baby sitting as career. Moreover, I am currently working for Irish couple who have 2 beautiful kids whose ages are about 4. Besides my First aid certificate, come in need of times, keeps you out from all worries about safety of your child. In addition, I can help you in running your errands.
After moving to Australia, in my free time after studies and baby sitting, I would like to roam some interesting places in Australia. Since, I have Visa for 1 year perhaps I might take few other courses after finishing my English courses and ofcourse with your suggestions. I am sure, you will definitely enjoy my company once you give me this opportunity.
Thanks in advance for considering my application and look forward for your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Collins.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re course, 40 hours sessions for 5weeks, designed particularly for people conside...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'visaed'.
Suggestion: Visaed
...ting places in Australia. Since, I have Visa for 1 year perhaps I might take few oth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02845528455 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78609535343 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662601626016 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8951783114 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3571428571 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34556593462 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11476615433 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329771900985 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166195176247 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916002445799 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.