Money should be spent on creating new buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
government should spend public money on wise and economically viable projects. However, it might be not acceptable when funds are spent on creating new buildings. Hence I don't completely agree with the argument that revenue expenditure should be on new buildings instead of renovating them. Lets discuss the issue in detail in following passages.
Income received from tax and other means should be primarily used for overall welfare. constructing new buildings for museums, town halls involves large amounts and comparaitvely costs more to renovating existing buildings. Already established buildings will not only be ineffective but also question of their future purpose remains same. In fact many old constructions which were used during British era in India are not only lost their charm but became historically ignored. Therefore it is suggested to renovate existing buildings more economically viable than erect new buildings. In many countries like United Kingdom most of the government buildings like railway station , Parliament are serving the nation as their famous landmark along with being major public access for every day activities.
Few points should be noticed before deciding either to invest public funds in constructing new public buildings are to renovating existing ones. If renovation is equally costing in comparison to new buildings then it is suggestive to prefer modern and strong buildings after affective disposal of old building. In which case government officials may sell the old building in public auction and use that resource for planning and construction of new buildings. Even renting old premises for continuous financial supply for mega projects also a good idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55172413793 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82943644971 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0423245467 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27186955634 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966130509517 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750109635758 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193222573337 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325903627692 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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