I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement, which was published in Perth Magazine Today on 18th June 2019.
My name is Jane Chris and I am the occupant of New Zealand. There are the two reasons that I opt this employment. The first one is, my little girl is studying in St. Joseph School and the second one is that my husband is residing in Australia for the last one year for the power plantation and from this job I would be able to meet my husband and daughter in the weekends.
I have been working as a nanny for the last 12 years in Day Care Center in New Zealand and my role and responsibility is to look after and foster them. As working for such a long time has given me enough experience to keep them engage, when their parents are not available along with the prescribed schedule assign by the Child Care Center. Moreover, I am a senior, tidy, patient and hardworking nanny, because of all these qualities i could perform my duty in a better way.
I will spend my quality time with my family as visiting them in every weekends, and i can also explore some tourist attractions with my husband as he is quiet passionate in ancient artifacts and monuments in Australia. Also,visit some renowned shopping malls and restaurants along with family.
I am look forward to hear your optimistic response.
Yours faithfully,
Jane Chris
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g nanny, because of all these qualities i could perform my duty in a better way. ...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...as visiting them in every weekends, and i can also explore some tourist attractio...
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Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , visit
...tifacts and monuments in Australia. Also,visit some renowned shopping malls and restau...
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Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...along with family. I am look forward to hear your optimistic response. Yours fait...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61475409836 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62314292329 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627049180328 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4573399712 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.363636364 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.098506316883 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353288109377 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316767998672 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516851414887 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277213092548 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.