You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job.Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter• provide information about yourself• give details of your previous work experience• say why the company shoul

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You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter
• provide information about yourself
• give details of your previous work experience
• say why the company should consider you for the job

Dear Sir,
I'm writing this letter to provide information about my qualifications so that you can publish my add in your newspaper. I live in Chandigarh, given job is good opportunity for me to show my skills.

I have done Bachelor of computer applications and after then two years diploma course in fashion designing along with Corel draw software. I have completed annual internship from Warlords communications organization. they work on Brochures, flyers, standee, advertisement, leaflets, printing ex cetra. I learnt different things from them they also do traveling agent. I feel like versatile knowledge I have with my professional interest in graphic designing.

I reckon I am perfect for this job because I had wonderful experience with my previous company. Your available vacancy in Mohali will be great platform for me to show my abilities my potential as well as my learning tricks. it is in tricity so there is no problem to reach on time.

I hope you will publish my advertisement in your newspaper. so it would beneficial for both.
Your faithfully
Nadia Handa

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, Im writing this letter to provide informa...
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Dear Sir, Im writing this letter to provide information about my qualificati...
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...e information about my qualifications so that you can publish my add in your news...
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...signing along with Corel draw software. I have completed annual internship from W...
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...m Warlords communications organization. they work on Brochures, flyers, standee, adv...
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...essional interest in graphic designing. I reckon I am perfect for this job becau...
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...otential as well as my learning tricks. it is in tricity so there is no problem to...
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...ish my advertisement in your newspaper. so it would beneficial for both. Your fa...
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...d beneficial for both. Your faithfully Nadia Handa
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...or both. Your faithfully Nadia Handa
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, i feel, i reckon, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1581920904 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13864055109 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700564971751 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7414464287 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2307692308 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222801401759 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722103953321 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722597267914 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142359048167 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711514246274 0.0580467560999 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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