You have spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised that you had left your wallet there.
Wite a letter to yoru friend. In your letter,
Thank your friend for the holiday
Exlain that you left yoru wallet in their house
Give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Sarah,
I just reached home and want to tell you that it was an awesome get-to-gether with you probably after a very long time. Under your company, I was able to get rid of the work related stresses and feel well replenished. It was only because of your generous offer by calling me to your house last week to put me up at your place, I rushed to your residence to get rid of the hustle and bustle of this industrial life. You are my savior!
After reaching home, I found that my purse is missing. I well reckon that I placed the purse in the cupboard of the bedroom. The wallet is a brown coloured Levi's one with leather coating on the outer. What's important is that my drivers license and my insurance card in it and I desparately need them at the soonest.
My office peer travels to work place via your location daily and he is ready to pass it to me from you. I have made him aware of this situation and he assured that he'll deliver it to me. He is of my height with a thick moustache and his name is Ryan. He will phone you once you reaches your residence and you can pass it on to him. I will probably ask him to give you a call by 09.30 AM if that is fine with you and you can then hand it over to him.
Thanks in advance and we'll meet up soon once again.
See you soon
Alfred
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
... one with leather coating on the outer. Whats important is that my drivers license an...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: HELL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'he'll'?
Suggestion: he'll
...e of this situation and he assured that hell deliver it to me. He is of my height wi...
^^^^
Line 7, column 279, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'reach'
Suggestion: reach
...ame is Ryan. He will phone you once you reaches your residence and you can pass it on t...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 32.9175257732 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.06201550388 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15113136369 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550387596899 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4001035561 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8571428571 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308700032614 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101835090246 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884621051504 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141401175057 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109436651717 0.0580467560999 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.27 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.