You hired a car from a rental company and while you were on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write to the company to explain it. You need to explain:
• Where you hired it and when?
• Describe how the accident happened?
• What you did after the accident?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you regarding an accident that happened last week at City Centre Square. I was driving the car I rented from your City Centre Deira office on the 12th May.
This accident happened on Monday the 15th May at 12 pm, while I was exiting the shopping mall parking area. A car right behind ran into the back of the car leaving a dent on the bumper. We had immediately called the traffic police from the accident spot. Since it was a minor accident and all papers of the car is up-to-date, there were no issues in getting the claim report from the police.
Following the accident, I have carefully driven it to a nearby long-term parking bay. I would prefer not to drive the car and cause any additional damage to the car. I hereby attach all the copies of claim reports for your reference. Please let me know when you can arrange to take back the car and original docs from me.
Sorry for the inconvenience caused. Awaiting your earliest response.
Yours faithfully,
Sandra Brown
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65027322404 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4064074838 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661202185792 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5135531048 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4615384615 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183948705771 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491940655816 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551354965492 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967616989473 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062734469956 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.