You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for the residents.
Write a letter to a councillor. In your letter:
introduce yourself
describe the probleml
say what you think the council should do about the situation
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Ahmed Karem, and I am one of Jaddah citizens. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about a new law that has been published by the councils a few days ago.
To begin with, local authorities imposed a law regarding new building which is people can not construction any house more than two floors, and I believe that it is not convenient for some families; they have more than one who needs to have its house. Therefore, most people do not agree about that, and they chose me to write this letter to you.
Hence, I have a suggestion; I hope it will be useful for all. It is recommended to give the law some flexibilities. In other words, if anyone needs to build his home more than two floors, he will submit documents which prove the reasons for this. In this time, you have the right to decide.
I look forward to hearing from you; your prompt response is highly appreciated. Thank you in advance.
Faithfully,
Ahmed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Ahmed Karem, and I am one of Jadda...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dam, I am Ahmed Karem, and I am one of Jaddah citizens. I am writing to express...
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Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...blished by the councils a few days ago. To begin with, local authorities imposed...
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Line 6, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his time, you have the right to decide. I look forward to hearing from you; your...
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Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d. Thank you in advance. Faithfully, Ahmed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58720930233 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6640534733 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656976744186 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9968007706 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164453592298 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636514788829 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521749981634 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098734021377 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043269913408 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.