You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to
regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents.
Write a letter to a councilor. In your letter:
•Introduce yourself.
•Describe the problem.
•Say what you think the council should do about the situation
Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is James Smith, a resident of Ventura society in north-western region of Mumbai wherein last week the local council has changed some regulations.
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the recent changes that were made to sound pollution by authorities. I hope you will consider my concern favourably.
Let me explain the situation in detail. Since people are allowed to use loudspeakers up to mid-night for house parties or wedding celebrations, they incessantly play music which leads to unwanted noise till 1 am in night. Although sound limit is pre-defined, this behavior still disturbs particularly school going children, who are trying to sleep early to go school next morning. This impacts not only children but also working professionals, who are logged-inform home, as they are not able to focus on their work or attend meetings with clients peacefully. This results in detrimentally affecting both personal but professional lives of many residents.
Would you kindly change the cut-off time to an evening time of 8 pm to discourage this practice of noise pollution late at night. Clearly, it will help the public to carry on their daily activities without any problems.
Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
James Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 445, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...hildren but also working professionals, who are logged-inform home, as they are not ab...
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Line 13, column 480, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...als, who are logged-inform home, as they are not able to focus on their work or a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34615384615 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98051720399 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.754807692308 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0319229448 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157735544988 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515279608263 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463594822293 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926048001633 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354699185838 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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