Dear sir/Madam
I am writing to express my interest in collaborating with your organization.
I am a student in the English language college and I am studying English literature for 6 semesters, while I am in summer holiday I prefer to do some voluntary without any salary.
The reason why is that teaching English to children and adolescence have been my goal which I thought always, since it would be a nice way in which youngsters and kids both could look wider to the world and also it is a way to be familiar with other cultures, beside I could achieve a good experience for my job prospects and also I believe people should donate their knowledge every time and everywhere.
In terms of my abilities in teaching I would point that my grade in speaking and reading is A which I gained last semester between my classmates, so I suppose I could teach both very well.
Travelling to the East countries and Kabol in Afghanistan always be a think that cross my mind,for this reason I would go to a country that it would be my prefer since, Afghanistan has so many kids and young people who are intelligence but in poverty and lack of education therefore I could teach them for 6 month, my documents are also attach to this letter if you require any further information ,feel free contact me.
Yours faithfully
Albert Einstein
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/Madam I am writing to express my interest in c...
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...e reason why is that teaching English to children and adolescence have been my go...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'thought'.
Suggestion: always thought
...d adolescence have been my goal which I thought always, since it would be a nice way in which ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... East countries and Kabol in Afghanistan always be a think that cross my mind,for...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ies and Kabol in Afghanistan always be a think that cross my mind,for this reason I wo...
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Suggestion: , for
...an always be a think that cross my mind,for this reason I would go to a country tha...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...istan has so many kids and young people who are intelligence but in poverty and lack of...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...tion therefore I could teach them for 6 month, my documents are also attach to this l...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'attached'.
Suggestion: attached
...them for 6 month, my documents are also attach to this letter if you require any furth...
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...r if you require any further information ,feel free contact me. Yours faithfu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71308016878 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7605579955 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590717299578 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 16.3608247423 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.590464431 44.8134815571 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.166666667 76.5299724578 243% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.5 16.8248392259 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 4.34317383033 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105008425486 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516841863801 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212675857644 0.0603063233224 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555730687783 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222155203118 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 8.37731958763 245% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 70.7449484536 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 7.45979381443 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 8.54432989691 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.