You live in an english speaking country and you want to do some voluntary unpaid work. Write a letter to a company called cultural Expeditions which organizes such trips. In your letter
Expalin why are you interested
Explain your skills and Experience
Indicate where would you like to volunteer
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writting to confirm you if there is any chance of trip to India in this coming july as I have developed my interest in volunteering myself for the social work related to personal hygeine. This will obviously help me in my field in coming future.
I am a graduate in medicine and have been working as a research fellow in King's Research Centre from the last three years. Aditionally, I have two years experience as an emergency medical officer from Alberta hospital
I have done my graduation from my this country. Being a research felow in medical field and emotional attachment, I am eager to work voluntarily on the personal hygeine in this developing country. I want to get a close look on the hygenic conditions in the slum areas to reduce the chances of increasing infectious diseases there. As I am on one month leave, i want to devote my whole time there only.
I am waiting for hearing from your side on the given mail rupinderbrar705@gmail.com.
Yours Faithfully,
Rupinder Singh
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| 2018-06-21 | Singh Brar | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... help me in my field in coming future. I am a graduate in medicine and have bee...
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Line 7, column 360, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ases there. As I am on one month leave, i want to devote my whole time there only...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Faithfully, Rupinder Singh
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85795454545 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15167847679 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2156024173 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0783927472949 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347669577126 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269226903285 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0417588642805 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116757274944 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.