You live near a university and would like to earn some extra money by renting a room in your apartment to a student. Write a letter to the university housing office. In your letter
1. Introduce yourself
2. Explain why your apartment would be a good living place for a student.
3. Describe the room you have for rent.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to inform the University housing office about a vacant room in my apartment. My job entails travelling out of town regularly. I would very much like to rent a room to a student. I would like to ask you to let me know if you find the suitable student.
My name is Dorcas Sun, I am a Medical Doctor involved in community health care in the next two towns. I live at No2, Bridgebow lane just a walking distance to the school.I would like to rent a room in my apartment to a student, preferably a returning student interested in changing accomodation.
Bridgebow street is a quiet street with free flow of traffic, majority of whom are the University staff, so he/she can easily catch a ride into the school when late. My rent is quite low as compared to others and there are a wide range stores close by.
The room available for went is a medium sized room upstairs, it belonged to my Son who is now married. It is comfortably furnished with a student reading table, chair, shelves and rug. It has a balcony with another side staircase attached, this way he/she gets enough privacy.
Please let me know if you find a suitable student who is interested. Thank you in advance for your help.
Yours Sincerely,
Dorcas Sun.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...e just a walking distance to the school.I would like to rent a room in my apartme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60792951542 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60500341859 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3522541589 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7142857143 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 4.34317383033 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254375026317 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084163388217 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772528931277 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119069083819 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077382754779 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.