You live in a rented accommodation which was recently damaged due to the bad weather.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
- explain what caused the damage
- why do you need them to fix the problem right away?
- what needs to be done to fix it?
Dear Mr.Lee,
I stay in one of your apartment located in Calwey's street, Francis towers, 4th Block. I would like to mention that two of the glass windows were broken during the snow stroms last week on Wednesday.
The day was quite good in weather in the morning, on an unpredictable tense broke up the snow storm by 6PM. The wind speed was very strong, even a few cars were pushed back while driving. A branch of the nearby tree facing my home, broken down and pushed hard towards the windows.
we tried to fix the glass ourselves, however the attempt was failed. The location of the broken window is right towards the main street and since, its broken we were unable to avoid the cold breeze, street dust, a the drizzing rain into our apartment. we have temporarily closed the whole window with a wooden sheet, however, as you know from the weather forecast on the cold winds in the coming weeks, it will be very difficult to live in such a condition. Furthermore, the window is also trapping the sunlight entering the home, since its closed , leaving the home gloomy and without ventillation.
The repair work needs two worksmen and a pair of glass sheets in 24X20 m length and the hardware tool kit. I whole of the repair work will not take more than 2 hours , but needed some expert who can handle the broken glass with safety. Though repair work demands lesser time and workskill, but is on high priority due to the upcoming weather condition.
Kindly work on this request and rectify the issue as soon as possible, as my dog has already fallen sick due the condition in my apartment.
Sincerely,
Pavani.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lee
Dear Mr.Lee, I stay in one of your apartment loca...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... pushed hard towards the windows. we tried to fix the glass ourselves, howev...
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Line 11, column 213, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
... to avoid the cold breeze, street dust, a the drizzing rain into our apartment. we ha...
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Line 11, column 253, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...a the drizzing rain into our apartment. we have temporarily closed the whole windo...
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Line 11, column 548, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ight entering the home, since its closed , leaving the home gloomy and without ven...
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Line 13, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...air work will not take more than 2 hours , but needed some expert who can handle t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 937.175257732 143% => OK
No of words: 288.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65972222222 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.322420833 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 127.690721649 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628472222222 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2661823287 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.230769231 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.49484536082 669% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0910605710969 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277936729656 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242809682527 0.0603063233224 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0409085028271 0.12726935374 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222722167563 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.