you live in a room in college where you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting.He/She has parties in room and sometimes borrows your things without asking you.
Write a letter to accommodation officer at the college and ask for new room next term. you would prefer a single room. explain your reasons
Dear Sir,
I am John, one of the student of batch 2018 living in Jack Apartment suite# 320 in shared accommodation.I request you to change my room in next semester due to annoying roommate.
What happened last week is that my roommate friend's visited him and they are doing party all night. you know that we have very strict timeline to complete our task. usually, i love living in a quiet place. I need more concentration on my studies. One more thing, he often take my things without my permission. I understand that he is my roommate but he should honor the privacy.In Fact yesterday, he borrows my calculator with asking. I was searching whole night.In the end i found in his cupboard.
Therefore, I would like to request you that please arrange a room for me in next term. if possible, i required a single room where i can study peacefully.I hope that will not be the problem for you.
Look forward to hear from you soon.
your sincerely,
John Kit.
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... Look forward to hear from you soon. your sincerely, John Kit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58720930233 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65556422684 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.71511627907 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.952916724 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.75 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271191906195 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844626770442 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570378213618 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154278232381 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321151911441 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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