You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the rooms sometimes borrow your things without asking you.
Write a letter to accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room and explain your reasons.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Olivia, my student number is 10095692. I am currently living in the Resident zone one. I have shared the room with my roommate, Cathy for approximately four months. There are quite a lot of issues that happened for the past four months. We have established a set of rules in terms of cleanliness, tidiness, and privacy but my roommate has failed to follow the established rules which makes it very unpleasant to live under the same roof with her.
Things such as cleaning up dishes, taking out your own garbage, or keeping the common area clean and tidy are totally not followed and ignored. She sometimes brought her boyfriend overnight which made me extremely uncomfortable as I do not enjoy seeing someone that I do not know in my room. Moreover, she sometimes borrowed my stuff but did not return it at all. Even though we have had a discussion about these issues, it seems like there is no improvement from her side at all.
To prevent further complications and any sort of issues that I may have with a roommate. I would like to request to transfer to a different room just by myself. I am sorry for any inconvenience that I have caused for you ahead of time.
Yours faithfully,
Olivia Nguyen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65158371041 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67944377265 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656108597285 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9512218869 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0769230769 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18488408666 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552037547296 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361749596475 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11151016574 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143368341496 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.