Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current living conditions. While the accommodation itself is fine, my housemate has become intolerable making it almost impossible for me to work. I hope you will consider my situation favorably.
Let me explain my situation. The trouble started about three months ago when my housemate first moved in. Prior to that, everything was fine; my old housemate was extremely considerate. My current housemate, however, stays up almost all night and plays incessantly loud music. As such, I have not been able to sleep properly and therefore cannot concentrate on my studies.
Would you kindly transfer me or my housemate to another room? I would much prefer to live with someone who is quieter and more considerate of others. As long as it is quiet, I don’t mind whom I live with.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Shima
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our consideration. Yours faithfully, Shima
^^^
Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ideration. Yours faithfully, Shima
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, therefore, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99358974359 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87673424811 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711538461538 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7712874625 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.9230769231 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162022482489 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597421900634 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592915624905 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121790906075 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693701313233 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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