Dear Sir,
I am writing to you requesting a change of accommodation preferences as soon as possible. I have tried to accommodate through various means, however it is unlikely for my roommate to abide by any change. Thus, an alternative accommodation would be the best solution.
Due to my various academic courses, I spend majority of my time studying. It is difficult to study while my roommate watches television or plays loud music. He fails to abide by any of my rules, hence I feel uncomfortable while preparing for an exam or completing assignments. Secondly, I am not comfortable to clean up a dirty room of soiled clothes, food, and trash. He does not like to maintain a clean environment.
I am considering a separate room with no roommates.I would like the room to be near my campus and furnished with basic necessities. I look forward to your response and accommodation arrangement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ering a separate room with no roommates.I would like the room to be near my campu...
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Line 6, column 114, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...to be near my campus and furnished with basic necessities. I look forward to your response and ac...
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Line 6, column 133, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s and furnished with basic necessities. I look forward to your response and accom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92763157895 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24250013615 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.926048677 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.9 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 4.34317383033 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110930680658 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398263337257 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470148921019 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833704556717 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453743024332 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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