Dear sir,
I am international student and this is my first year in the faculty of engineering. I have applied for accommodation in college campus for three months. Fortunately, I have been accepted to stay in a double room.
I am writing this letter to you because there are many issues I face with my room mate. one of main problems is that our sleeping time is different so we disturb each other. While my part-time job starts from 1 pm and ends at 8 pm, his work begins at 8 pm and finishs at 3 am. Therefore, this will affect negatively on our study dy.Another issue is that he does not my privacy by bringing his friends to the room in the weekends. this makes me depressed and embarrased.
I have two solutions to fix this situation by either moving to another room or changing my room mate. As the exams are going to begin after 2 months, I need each second to focus and study.
I am looking forward to your action as soon as possible
Yours faithfully,
Beshoy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39779005525 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62732597779 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685082872928 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2578747436 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3636363636 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191498455809 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635620115664 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763843580642 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849072972314 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686774557762 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.