You live with a roommate at university but you have trouble studying because of a problem related to your roommate. Write a letter to an administrator at your university and include:
Who you are
The problem
What you suggest they do
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I have been encountering some issues while studying because of my roommate. I am Kirti Likhi, second year post graduation student of Cost Management and Planning in your institution. I am residing at Universal house of campus since last year. My room number 36 B.
Let me explain my situation. The trouble started last month when my housemate changed. My old roommate was very considerate and not only he never disturbed me in my studies but he also assist me numerous times in my academics. My new one, however, is a complete opposite of him. He sleeps late at night and play music almost throughout the night at insanely high voice. Due to which I am unable to sleep properly, and hence cannot concentrate on studies. Although,I have requested him almost every night but he never entertain my request.
Would you please change my room or roommate? I am fine with any type of accommodation or I will not mind with whom I will be living until I am not getting disturbed in my studies.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Kirti Likhi
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| 2021-07-22 | KIRTI LIKHI | 81 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to let you know...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ement and Planning in your institution. I am residing at Universal house of campu...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'assists'.
Suggestion: assists
... disturbed me in my studies but he also assist me numerous times in my academics. My n...
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Line 5, column 464, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... cannot concentrate on studies. Although,I have requested him almost every night b...
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Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'entertains'.
Suggestion: entertains
...ted him almost every night but he never entertain my request. Would you please change ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, second, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7806122449 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75144787904 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.64823101 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4666666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0666666667 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192183453018 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673602487697 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723367505152 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147882694346 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656000540923 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.