Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to register my interest in being a volunteer for the 'Clean air drive' initiative that you advertised in The Hindu paper on Sunday, June 15, 2019.
Smog is a major concern for the residents of HSR Layout. Increasing number of housing complexes and apartment has contribute to the deplorable quality of the air that we breathe. Firstly, the number of commuters using cars in this locality is quite high compared to other parts of the city, it estimated that about fifty percent of the residents in HSR Layout use car as their primary mode of transport. Increasing number of cars in the roads early in the morning has not only contributed to the heavy traffic in the outer ring road during the rush hours, it also has detrimental effects on the quality of air because of the vehicular pollution.
I would love to volunteer in promoting the use of smart bikes and run awareness campaigns in the area. Planting more trees in pavements and nearby parks will help us in increasing the level of oxygen in the atmosphere. Cycle tracks for commuters would encourage the use of bi-cycles. These initiatives could help us build a smart city that is eco-friendly and sustainable.
Looking forward to your response in encouragement in creating a truly smart city.
Your faithfully,
Rajie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: DATE_WEEKDAY[2]
Message: The date June 15, 2019 is not a Sunday, but a Saturday.
...at you advertised in The Hindu paper on Sunday, June 15, 2019. Smog is a major concern for the r...
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Line 6, column 115, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
... of housing complexes and apartment has contribute to the deplorable quality of the air th...
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Line 6, column 540, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vy traffic in the outer ring road during the rush hours, it also has detrimental ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89777777778 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74252834596 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.510547228 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.181818182 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0869154339419 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361347589281 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407234396182 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478937336443 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219389624477 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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