Dear Project Manager,
Concerning your advertisement regarding assistance in environmental problems on w.e.f 7th October 2019, please be informed my name is John employed in a multination organisation and residing in DHA phase II. However, the Cricket ground in our area surrounded by garbage and rubbish for three months since it opens for the public use. Besides, it was pristine and isolated before the access to the ground given to the public. Furthermore, affecting not only the people living in society, in fact, but the pedestrians also pass around the territory facing problems. In addition to this, produce germs, bacterias, plaguing and other diseases for the people play in the ground or living surroundings.
Preferably, assist you for cleaning the area and the ground territory. Therefore, possibly gather volunteers for cleaning and installation of rubbish bins nearby the ground with regular intervals. In addition to this, requesting you to apply cleaning tax to all the members of society to ensure the people use bins responsibly and to avoid the problem in future.
Expectedly, looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
John Moses
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 353, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ns responsibly and to avoid the problem in future. Expectedly, looking forward to hear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, look, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42934782609 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88245929674 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66847826087 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3426598566 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 4.34317383033 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140235676753 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533546570361 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415643766294 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755695124654 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128129304275 0.0580467560999 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 8.71597938144 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.